tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-891456773161914917.post8879575190735122576..comments2023-12-17T16:21:13.466-08:00Comments on written butterfly...let romance take flight: Saturday After Dark...WIP "When Dove Cries"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-891456773161914917.post-60425909194678224642014-02-11T01:01:01.093-08:002014-02-11T01:01:01.093-08:00Now, that's what I call a real 'AfterDark ...Now, that's what I call a real 'AfterDark Moment', where you vividly describe the sensations the heroine was feeling and the two men that were penetrating Dove. Better yet, someone will have to bust out with a toy after reading this scene. I smell a good masturbation story! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to read more Beth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-891456773161914917.post-6186072106861069632014-02-10T06:34:55.518-08:002014-02-10T06:34:55.518-08:00Visualized very movement and gesture for a red ho...Visualized very movement and gesture for a red hot sizzling scene. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-891456773161914917.post-52646183791145173792014-02-09T11:37:59.969-08:002014-02-09T11:37:59.969-08:00Red hot and excellently writtenRed hot and excellently writtenJulian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.com