Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com
J S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Theresa Stuart : http://oneuniquewomanswords.blogspot.com
Pablo Michaels: http://www.pmmanmanromance.com
J S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Theresa Stuart : http://oneuniquewomanswords.blogspot.com
Pablo Michaels: http://www.pmmanmanromance.com
I decided to do something a little different for my Saturday
After Dark moment, going with an excerpt from a WIP. Usually, I don't
like doing this because you never know when or if the story will be picked up
by a publisher. I also don’t like
releasing the names of my titles before I get a contract on them because I once
had a publisher change a title on me.
But, I’ve been working very hard on this story (the last book in a
trilogy) and it’s near completion, so I thought I’d write a little backdoor
action.
I hope you enjoy!
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Cade grunted and he lifted Dove’s
hips. His cock slid almost all the way
out of her but before she felt any loss, she felt Draven pushing into her ass.
“Don’t
tense up,” Draven ordered and Dove took a deep breath. “Good.
God, Dove, you’re so tight!”
In
and in he went and the burning returned.
Dove held her breath, not sure if she was enjoying the new
sensation. But just as she thought she
wanted to stop, Draven pulled out of her a little to give Cade room to push
in. They worked her like this for a
minute or so, each going in little by little, letting her adjust to their
double invasion. It began to
feel…amazing. Nerves she never thought
she had began to come alive, intensifying the feeling of two men sliding into
her at different times, never letting her body have a break from the
electrifying assault on her senses.
“You
ready, Cade?” Draven asked, his voice a little gruff.
“Yeah,”
Cade replied, answering with an equally strained tone.
Before
she could ask what they meant, both men pulled out of her and then surged
together, burying their cocks together at the same time. Dove gasped, unable to believe the feeling of
being totally consumed. She had thought
being filled with one or the other was amazing, but this was beyond words. Beyond anything she had imagined. They began to fuck her in earnest, both
pumping into her holes, and her juices ran as everything inside her tightened
around them. Sweat dripped off each of
them, making their bodies slick as they moved against one another. Dove felt something building, something so
intense she was almost scared to reach it, but there was no stopping the
pleasure Draven and Cade wrung from her body, the feeling of being
consumed. She screamed as the dam broke,
flinging her off into space with a climax so hard and earth shattering that
darkness covered her vision. Dimly she
heard both men finding their own release and felt their cocks pumping deep
within her body.
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Red hot and excellently written
ReplyDeleteVisualized very movement and gesture for a red hot sizzling scene. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNow, that's what I call a real 'AfterDark Moment', where you vividly describe the sensations the heroine was feeling and the two men that were penetrating Dove. Better yet, someone will have to bust out with a toy after reading this scene. I smell a good masturbation story! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to read more Beth.
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