Forgotten Rebels MC series
28 February 2019
What Would I Invent if I were Stuck on an Island?
Week #9 Writing Challenge... What would I invent if I were stuck on an island?
I've often thought about what I would need/want if I were stuck on a deserted island. Why have I often thought this?...I haven't a clue. I'm weird. But whether or not it stems from the movie "Castaway" or from reading "Surviving Raine" by Shay Savage, I figured there are a few things that would be absolutely necessary to survive living on an island.
The logical item would be a satellite phone to call for help.
Or a boat.
But my knee-jerk answer is chapstick. And maybe a book to keep my mind occupied. As a writer there's nothing worse than being impotent on being able to write. If I had a book, at least that would keep me occupied.
Until I memorized the entire thing and then started acting out the scenes. I'd have to play all parts, of course, and if it was a romance then it'd get kinda awkward during the sex scenes.
….But I digress.
That's not what this post is about. It's about what I would INVENT.
I'd invent chapstick, since I would not have any access to writing utensils, paper, and a printing press to invent a book. Somehow...someway...I'd try to invent something to put on my lips so they wouldn't chap. There is nothing worse (as a personal beauty thing) than having dry lips. Maybe I'd use coconuts. Or fish goo. Or find a plant that would help. Obviously, I will have a lot of time on my hands to figure out the correct ingredients.
To see what the other Evernighties have come up with in their writing challenge this week, check out the other blog posts!
https://meganmorganauthor.com
https://katherinewyvern.blogspot.com
27 February 2019
Wednesday's Writers Block Exercise
Got Writer’s Block?
Yeah, it happens to
the best of us. Life gets in the way and your brain is taken in another
direction and before you know it, it’s been days or weeks since you last looked
at that book you’re trying to write. You’ve forgotten little details.
What eye color did you give your hero? What town was your heroine born
in? Perhaps you need to jumpstart your creative mojo, and that's what
this series is designed for. Not to explain writer's block, but to help you
move in a different direction.
This one is a difficult exercise for me because I
think of my strong points as a writer is dialogue. I take pride in my character’s
interaction with each other and talking can give good insight into the thoughts
and reasons behind actions. But I agree there is a time and place for action
verses talking.
While talking can be a good way for two characters
to convey feelings, remaining silent can also give subtle clues. Think of Heathcliff
of Wuthering Heights (I, personally, don’t think he’s a romantic figure at all,
but this isn’t about romance). Heathcliff is stoic, angry, basically a
lumbering brute. His lack of communication is an excellent insight into who he is.
#8
Stop Talking
Actions speak louder than words. If your
characters couldn’t talk, what would they do?
> If your hero could only say five words, what
would they be?
> Could the story beats happen in a montage
rather than full scenes? What would those moments be?
Dialogue is great, but sometimes your characters
need to shut up and do something. Look for ways to take away their ability to
talk, and force them to find other ways to communicate.
There are countless ways to make normal speech
impossible, from stealth to equipment failure to foreign languages.
Silence can also be a choice. Maybe your hero isn’t
saying anything because he’s simply done talking.
Happy Writing!
***John August
designed these cards to help writers fix plot holes, spice up stock characters
and rethink your themes. They, of course, do not guarantee you’ll get
published or that you’ll become the next J.K. Rowling, and of course they are
only a tool to help you think outside the box. I make no monetary gain with
them nor do I expect anything in return. I do not own the contents in
these cards. If you're interested in them, here's the amazon link: https://www.amazon.com/Writer-Emergency-Pack/dp/B00R6ZLIOY/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1502046610&sr=8-2&keywords=john+august
26 February 2019
Historical Romance Author - Arabella Sheen on her NEW RELEASE!
Hello Arabella! Thank
you so much for visiting Written Butterfly with me today! It’s such a pleasure to chat with you. So tell me…
Q) How did you dream
up the dynamics of your characters?
Arabella: Hi,
Beth. Thanks for having me on Written Butterfly.
So…you want to know how I envisaged the subtleties and
undercurrents that were meant to happen to my leading characters between the
covers of the book.
Well…I had this story in my head that needed to be told. It
went along the lines of: Lord Redfield needs a wife. How was he going to find
her? And what were the problems he would face internally and externally before
“she” (whoever she was going to be) said yes to his proposal.
And then it came to me… I would tell the story from every
characters own point of view.
An individual chapter for an individual character.
Instead of changing mid-scene from the hero’s side of the
story to the heroine’s take on things, I allocated them their own chapters. I
also worked in the same way when it came to featuring the maids and the footmen,
and other family members who also play a vital part in the story.
It made for interesting reading and lots of hot, steamy love
scenes!!!
Q) Can you give a
fun or interesting fact about your book?
Arabella: You might not know this, but as well as
writing historical romance, I also write contemporary sensual novels. When my
nine-to-five day shift is done, I then sit at the laptop and write. On average,
so far, each novel I’ve written has taken me approximately six months to write.
This novel, A
Bride for Lord Redfield,
was like butter on a hot knife. The words just seemed to drip onto the page. It
took me two weeks to write. Two weeks to edit. And the rest is history.
When I sent
the manuscript off to my American publisher, Beachwalk Press at http://beachwalkpress.com/, to consider,
I received a reply saying: “great job” and the contract was signed then and
there.
Q) What do you think is your strongest asset
as a writer? …What is your weakest factor as a writer?
Arabella: I believe my strongest asset as a
writer is in knowing that I can’t please all of my readers all of the time. I
deliver what I hope to be a good romance that will stand the test of time and
hope the reader likes it too.
Years and
years ago, my debut novel, “Blinded by Desire” (a billionaire romance with a
hint of passion…and more), kick started with a few bad reviews. One reader’s
review said she wanted more explicit action in the bedroom and another reviewer
covered the fact that there were several spelling errors.
I took these
comments on the chin realizing my sensual
is different from their erotic and
that U.K. spelling and grammar check is different to the U.S. way of writing
things.
As a
consequence, any subsequent novels have been written with these harsh reviewers
remarks in mind, and I think I’ve improved.
My weakest
factor as a writer is . . . Marketing!!! It takes me away from the time I have
to write and I dislike having to promote myself and my books into the spot
light. My life is never front row seats…it’s always been back row, upper
circle.
Q) Do you try more to
be original or to deliver to readers what they want?
Arabella: A bit
of both, I think.
No reader wants to read the same old thing, so an original
slant on the classic love story is a must. Irrelevant of the genre, or
sub-genre, (m/f, f/f, m/m, mfm or any other combination), a reader wants
something different…but something that still delivers the predictable and
desired happy-ever-after ending.
Q) Do you plan all
your characters out before you start a story or do they develop as you write?
Arabella: I’m
what we call in the trade…a pantser. Someone who flies by the seat of their
pants. Wings it. Makes it up as they go along.
To a certain extent I plot…but it’s minimal. I sometimes
draft out the blurb (info that’s found on the back cover of a book) and build
the romance, tensions and conflicts from there.
Q) What are your
upcoming projects?
Arabella: I never
like to say I’m going to do this or that. It’s a sure way to put a jinx on
things. In the pipeline is another sensual and another sweet historical regency
romance, but that could all change. I could start work on another billionaire
contemporary…
A Bride
for Lord Redfield
Arabella Sheen
A risqué regency
romp enjoyed by both servants and masters as love and passion is
discovered―above and below stairs―in his lordship’s household.
At Redfield House, everyone is busy with
preparations for a ball, and rumor is rife in the servants’ quarters that the
master is about to propose.
Lord Thomas Redfield realizes the time has
come for him to take a wife and that this duty can no longer be delayed. The
only trouble is…he isn’t sure the desire he once felt for Catherine, the woman
he was previously betrothed to, is over and a new life with Rosalinda can
begin.
Can Lord Redfield take Miss Rosalinda Mills for
his wife, and will she agree to an engagement knowing he could still be in love
with Catherine?
As the weekend unfolds and the fun begins, a
bevy of illicit encounters are enjoyed between maids, footmen, grooms, and
guests, while his lordship inwardly struggles with the problem of finding a
wife.
Content Warning: contains
passionate, sensual love scenes
Genre(s): Historical Romance
Genre(s): Historical Romance
Excerpt
A Bride for Lord Redfield
Lord
Thomas Redfield intended to marry Miss Rosalinda Mills, but as yet, she was not
aware of his wishes.
She
wasn't a beauty by any means, but she had an attraction of sorts. Refined,
polished, and cultured, she also had a conversation that did not bore him. Most
women he knew were chatterboxes and windbags or bluestockings and dull. But Miss
Mills was neither.
She fell
into none of these categories, and after several days and evenings spent in her
company, Thomas was prepared to discover more.
* * * *
"Which
debutante would you have me consider? Which of your many friends will wish to
parade their daughters before me?" Thomas asked his mother cynically.
"Well,
actually, I was thinking about―"
"Enough,
Mama. I'm afraid I must decline your suggestion. Your attempt at arranging a
marriage between Catherine and myself was not exactly a success." He
recalled with bitterness the outcome of that proposed union. The fact that
Catherine and Harry had married had hurt his pride and ego enormously. "An
arranged marriage that is of your making and to your liking is not for me. I
refuse, especially after my enlightening experience with Catherine. My lesson,
when it comes to taking a wife, has been well and truly learned, and I would be
a fool if I were to repeat such an endeavor again."
Those
were empty words, and he knew it. At some point in time he would have to marry.
The difficulty was finding the right woman who was malleable and compliant to
tie the knot with. Someone who would obey him without question. Someone who
would tolerate his illicit liaisons without too much objection. And that type
of woman was hard to find.
"But
you have to try to find a wife."
"If
I do, this time, love will definitely not be in the equation."
Thomas
decided that a marriage of convenience, where he would wed and bed someone
without properly wooing her for love, was his best option. And that was what he
was going to propose when he offered for Rosalinda. He liked her. They got
along. But the all-consuming passion and physical attraction he had once felt
when betrothed to Catherine was missing when he thought of Rosalinda.
A wife
was needed, and she would have to be of good birth and excellent breeding.
Someone with whom he could produce an heir. The only question was…with whom and
exactly when? So far, by process of elimination, Rosalinda was the best
contender.
Having
compiled a list of potential candidates from the many socialites within his
circle of friends and acquaintances, Rosalinda seemed the best option. He had
known her for years, and although he had never thought of her as a potential
wife until recently, he was now prepared to do so. There was respect between
them, and he hoped some sort of convivial relationship could blossom. It was a
shame that the all-consuming love he had felt for Catherine was not there.
"Your
betrothal to Catherine was more than three years ago, and even though I suspect
your heart was never truly given to her, your feelings must have recovered.
Surely?"
That
just proved how little his mother knew him. Like many of his acquaintances, she
thought his emotions had not been affected by Catherine's decamp. She was so
wrong. His wound was still raw.
"Mama,
the subject is closed for discussion. At least for now. I have to go riding
with Rosalinda and―"
"So
the servants' rumors are true. You are thinking of proposing to
Rosalinda!"
Thomas
approached his mother and bent to place a kiss upon her cheek. "Don't
fret. You will be the first to know if and when she accepts my offer."
His
mother's chin dropped, her mouth open with astonishment. And with that
announcement, Thomas left the room and went to change into his buckskins and
riding boots.
Buy Links:
Beachwalk Press http://beachwalkpress.com/a-bride-for-lord-redfield/
Amazon
Universal: http://bit.ly/2tx1VkW
Barnes
& Nobel – Nook: http://bit.ly/2GIyTYa
Kobo: http://bit.ly/2U2ETxO
Beachwalk
Press: http://bit.ly/2NrHKhw
. . . and other reputable ebook distributors.
About
Arabella Sheen
Arabella Sheen is a
contemporary and regency romance author of sensual, passionate love stories.
She is a member of the Romantic Novelists' Association and was shortlisted for
the RNA – Joan Hessayon Award.
Having worked for
nearly twenty years as a theatre nurse in the amazing city of Amsterdam in the
Netherlands, she now lives in the southwest of England with her family.
One of the many
things Arabella loves to do is to read. And when she's not reading or writing
romance novels, she is either on her allotment sowing and planting with the
seasons or she's sitting on the sofa pandering to the demands of her
attention-seeking feline.
You
can find Arabella and her romance books at the following places:
Website
and Blog: www.arabellasheen.co.uk
Facebook:
www.facebook.com/ArabellaSheenAuthor
Twitter:
www.twitter.com/ArabellaSheen
23 February 2019
Lynn Burke is Back with a new Devil's Outlaw MC Release!
Keywords: MC Romance, May/December, Contemporary, Erotic, Romance, Suspense, Series, HEA
When a barely-legal blonde with a lithe, young body shows up at the Devil’s Outlaw MC strip joint to audition as a dancer, Ian “Bowie” Davies wants nothing more than to burrow between her long legs and claim her. She's too young for his dominant side though, too innocent for the sharp edges of his darker desires. And way too hot to let another man touch her -- a thought that has his hands itching to use his signature knives against any bastard who messes with his angel.
Hannah Harris ran away from home at age eighteen, desperate to escape the prison of her strict parents. Determined to delight in the sins her father preaches against, she puts her ballet talents to work, using a stripper pole to make a living. Dancing for Bowie and his blade has her panting to explore some of the “firsts” she planned to save for her future husband.
But when Bowie and his brothers attempt extortion beyond her parent’s ten-thousand dollar reward for Hannah's safe return, she's left with a difficult choice. Offer up the evidence to put the notorious biker gang behind bars, or protect Bowie and chalk the shit-show up as a lesson learned and begin her independent life anew -- without the lying bastard who owns her heart.
Can Bowie cut through the blindfold of lies on Hannah’s eyes and surrender the truth in his heart to win her back?
*Warning: Spanking, anal sex, knife play
PURCHASE LINKS:
15% Sale at Changeling Press: https://www.changelingpress.com/bowie-s-angel-devil-s-outlaws-mc-1-b-2834
Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07ND35X1F
Amazon UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bowies-Angel-Devils-Outlaws-MC-ebook/dp/B07ND35X1F
B&N: https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/books/1130503668
Kobo: https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/bowie-s-angel
iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/id1451714897
ADULT EXCERPT:
Too motherfucking young, but it was no wonder she’d gotten past Brewer. Mile-long legs, sexy-as-fuck flared hips, pert little breasts, all wrapped in leather that screamed sex but didn’t match what her pale green eyes revealed.
The young woman who had sauntered into my office like she had every intention of dropping to her knees if I told her to disappeared the second I’d crowded close. Close enough to drop her focus to my chest. Close enough her heartbeat thrummed beneath my thumb. Close enough I could feel the purity of her soul as though her body’s energy rippled across the inches separating us.
An inexperienced submissive for sure, and she had my dominant nature kicking and screaming for release -- along with my dick strangling in my jeans. Fuck, yes.
“Look at me.”
Her eyelids snapped up, those pale eyes letting me see right into the depths of her.
“How old are you?” I asked, my smile long fucking gone.
“Twenty-one,” she whispered.
“Liar.”
She gulped again, but held my gaze.
“Name?”
“H-Hannah.” She swallowed again as I smoothed my thumb up and down over her thumping artery. “Hannah Morris.”
“Hannah. A pure-as-fuck name for a pure-as-fuck little girl who should be with her mommy and daddy rather than in the devil’s playground,” I murmured, and she straightened, tensing beneath my hold.
“I am not a little girl.” Fire shot from her narrowed eyes as she all but spit the words at me.
I pressed flush against her body, grinding my dick against her hip. “Sassy. I like a little backbone in my women.”
She gasped, her eyes going wide. “Get off me.”
To the point words, but nothing other than desire laced her voice. She made no move to escape either, her hands grasping at my shirt as though hanging on for the ride of her life.
“Twenty-one, hmm? Got proof of that?” She shook her head, and I leaned in closer, my lips a breath from hers, so fucking ready to give her that ride. “So you came in here thinking you could get a job baring your tight body and fucking that pole up on stage without an ID.”
“Yes,” she whispered even though I hadn’t asked a question, her sweet breath jerking my dick in its prison.
“Gonna cost you.”
“Wh-what?”
“Not sure yet.” My lips brushed hers like a feather, far from a kiss, and she moaned. “A kiss?” I suggested.
She swallowed, no longer tense but trembling.
“Mmm, I think so,” I murmured when she didn’t answer, lust and satisfaction simmering throughout my body. “But where?”
I pulled back, and her eyelids fluttered open, her pupils dominating the green of her eyes.
“Here?” I asked, smoothing my thumb over her plump, glossed lips.
“Here?” I brushed my knuckles down over the swell of her right tit, my dick jerking again at the hardness of her nipple beneath my grazing caress. “Or…”
I worked my hand between our bodies, down over the front of her leather skirt until I caressed the smooth, warm skin above her knee.
“Here?” I slid my palm up the inside of her thigh.
Another shudder rippled through her, and she fisted her hands in my shirt.
I rubbed my thumb in circles just shy of her pussy, need like I’d never known taking me to the edge of my self-control, a self-control I prided myself on.
“What’s it going to be, Hannah?” Ragged and low, my voice sent a shiver over her body.
“M-my lips.”
I took her mouth in a bruising kiss, tightening my hold on her neck, tilting her head and thrusting my tongue between her lips that tasted of strawberries and cream. Not just innocent, but fucking untried in every way -- she didn’t have a clue what to do with her tongue, so I showed her, sliding alongside hers, tasting, taking until she got the hang of sucking face.
She whimpered, and beyond giving a fuck how old the little temptress was, I cupped her pussy.
Hot and soaked.
Fuck.
She tore her mouth from mine and whimpered.
I licked the sweet taste of her gloss from my lips and pressed the heel of my hand against her clit.
“Oh!” Lower lip between her teeth, she clenched her eyes shut, her brow furrowing as she bucked beneath my touch.
“You like my hand on you.”
She whimpered and ground against me even though she shook her head.
“You’ll like my tongue even more.” I dropped to my knees and shoved her skirt up around her tiny waist. Pink lacy panties -- so fucking virginal, I groaned. Goose bumps pebbled her legs, and I lifted my gaze, sliding a finger along the edge of her panties and pushing them aside while grasping her ass cheek with my other hand.
Hannah still had her lower lip between her teeth, eyes clenched shut, hands fisted at her sides.
“Look at me.”
Like a good little girl, she obeyed, and I held her gaze, flicking my tongue out.
Sweeter than any fucking cotton candy I’d licked before. Addictive honey…
© Lynn Burke 2018
ABOUT LYNN BURKE:
Lynn Burke is a full time mother, voracious gardener, and scribbler of spicy romance stories. A country bumpkin turned Bay Stater, she enjoys her chowdah and Dunkin Donuts when not trying to escape the reality of city life.
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22 February 2019
Spotlight on Laura M. Baird's "Shades of Sepia"!
Shades of Sepia
Cover Model, 2
Tasha Linthrop paved a path all her own by
becoming a cover model and opening her own boutique. Marcus Everly is a veteran
who isn’t ashamed to put his physique in front of the camera to pay the bills
while pursuing his passion of working with other veterans.
The two have been friends, dancing around
their attraction to one another, and when they finally get together, it’s
explosive. But can Marcus move beyond his doubts of being good enough for
Tasha? Especially when another shows interest in her? Tasha will have to decide
who holds her heart.
Amazon tiny link: https://tinyurl.com/y2ru8tje
Excerpt: Shades of Sepia
“What do you think you’re doing, Tasha?” Those slowly
whispered words seemed innocent enough, but she knew there was a hint of anger
in them.
“Dancing,” she returned. “What are you doing, Marcus?”
“Trying to keep you from making a mistake you’d
regret.” He held her tightly to his chest, never halting their movements. And
just as her hands came to rest atop his, Marcus spun her around, causing her
chest to plaster against his front. Tasha swallowed a gasp as he bent his face
close to hers and said, “You’re not ready for what those two have to offer.”
She struggled fruitlessly against his strong hold, her
temper flaring as her teeth ground together. “What the hell would you know
about what I am or am not ready for? You lost your chance to find out.”
“Is that so?” Menacing didn’t even begin to describe
the tone his voice held as his eyes challenged.
“That is
so,” Tasha replied, lifting her chin, her gaze never leaving his. Something
dark flashed between them, and she wondered where her sanity must’ve gone when
she gave him a seductive smile.
Now
who’s challenging?
In a split second, Marcus crushed his lips to hers,
his tongue demanding entry. Tasha opened on a whimper, surprised at the
intensity of this assault on her mouth. There was no escaping as he pressed
firmly to her back with one hand, the other reaching for her ass, squeezing
none too gently.
But Tasha didn’t want to escape, she wanted more.
Rising on the toes of her shoes, she matched his raw passion, suddenly ravenous
for the man as she feasted on his rich mouth that hinted of cinnamon. Pressing
into him, she clawed at his t-shirt, wishing she had his skin beneath her
hands. Tasha took the excitement building from their earlier encounter and let
it fuel her, let it propel her to something she knew would be glorious with
this man. She managed to remove her hands from between their bodies so she
could clutch his head, letting him know not to move his mouth from what it was
currently doing.
Marcus growled as he continued to plunder, both hands
pawing her ass and grinding their bodies together. There was no doubt his body
was aroused, but he pulled away abruptly, staring at her with uncertainty.
“Tasha,” he rasped, “we’re playing with fire.”
“Do you want me or not, Marcus?” She practically
panted while she massaged the tense muscles in his neck.
“Do you really need to ask?” He pressed into her, the
heat of his straining erection radiating through the barrier of their clothes.
“Then why don’t we do something about it?” She gently
pulled his mouth to hers, kissing him sweetly now. As much as she loved the
fierce and wild, she wanted a slow burn, a lasting fire with a few explosions
now and then. Okay, maybe more than just a few. And it seemed Marcus did as
well as his hands gently cradled her face while he returned her kisses with
such tenderness she wondered if this was the same man who had nearly come
undone just moments ago.
He pulled away and stared, his eyes softening,
questioning. Then he said, “Let me take you home.”
Bio: Laura M. Baird
Wife, mother, former U. S. Army sergeant,
and dental hygienist, I can now add published author to the list. I’m slowly
transitioning out of hygiene, hoping to make writing a full-time endeavor.
After writing for many years, my publishing dreams came true (at the age of
50!) in August of 2017. Since then, I’ve had the fortune to work with four
publishers, connect with fantastic people, and am constantly learning on my
journey.
A voracious reader myself, I strive to
write stories I can be proud of and enjoyed by many; ones that are not only
sexy and fun, but thoughtful as well.
I grew up on the East Coast and now reside
on the West Coast, having lived in Florida, Georgia, South Carolina, Massachusetts,
Idaho, and Washington State. Hubby and I hope to fill our passports with stamps
from many destinations, Scotland and Fiji being at the top of the list. We’ve
raised two sons who make us proud. And when not writing, I’m reading, doing
house projects, and simply enjoying time with hubby.
My links:
Website: https://www.laurambairdauthor.com
Twitter: https://twitter.com/LauraMBaird
Amazon page: https://tinyurl.com/y98u9mva
Goodreads: https://tinyurl.com/y7o6a3v6
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/LauraMBaird
itunes/Apple: https://tinyurl.com/y8qsqa54
20 February 2019
Wednesday's Writers Bypass Exercise
Got Writer’s Block?
Yeah, it happens to
the best of us. Life gets in the way and your brain is taken in another
direction and before you know it, it’s been days or weeks since you last looked
at that book you’re trying to write. You’ve forgotten little details.
What eye color did you give your hero? What town was your heroine born
in? Perhaps you need to jumpstart your creative mojo, and that's what
this series is designed for. Not to explain writer's block, but to help you
move in a different direction.
I utilize this card a lot. I find writing the
everyday routine for my characters boring as hell, but a necessary evil to get
to the next interesting point in the story. So to help offset my own hair
pulling, I will skip ahead and write all the cool, juicy, adventurous stuff
first. If I find inspiration for the fill-in-gaps, I’ll go back and write. Many
times, however, when I’m editing through what I wrote, the little details come
to me and makes the writing flow better.
Another plus point to this card is that you may
stumble onto a plot twist or an idea you hadn’t had, and this gives you a
chance to rewrite scenes to support your new vision.
#7
Move Ahead Three Spaces
What would happen if you skipped over the next
few scenes/days/years?
>Look for ways to combine scenes and
locations. If your hero needs to have an
argument and then go hiking, can the argument
happen on the hike?
> List three events the reader might anticipate
will happen in your story, such as Regionals, prom, or the wedding. Could you skip
ahead to one of them?
> Think about transitions: Is there a natural
way to make it clear that time has passed (e.g., Christmas trees, sunrise,
graduation)?
Jumping forward give you a chance to re-center
your characters in the story, and show the effects of their actions. Like a
curtain between acts, it lets you change styles and settings and seasons.
Readers can often fill in what they missed,
particularly when the overall patters are clear. We don’t need to see every
week at Hogwarts, because we know how schools work.
If skipping scenes makes little impact on your
story, that’s a clear sign you need to get rid of them.
Happy Writing!
***John August
designed these cards to help writers fix plot holes, spice up stock characters
and rethink your themes. They, of course, do not guarantee you’ll get
published or that you’ll become the next J.K. Rowling, and of course they are
only a tool to help you think outside the box. I make no monetary gain with
them nor do I expect anything in return. I do not own the contents in
these cards. If you're interested in them, here's the amazon link: https://www.amazon.com/Writer-Emergency-Pack/dp/B00R6ZLIOY/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1502046610&sr=8-2&keywords=john+august
19 February 2019
Historical Transgender Romance from Katherine Wyvern
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